Perfect Sin!

A noted look into the world of biblical sin.

Tweak at flesh to send ripples of pleasure,

Thoughts of sex are a legendry must,

Ramming bodies slip into temptation,

We laugh at angels so full of sheer lust.

 

Tight knots make bread as soft as skin,

Cheese and wine from the finest Normandy,

Meat and butter fill high in my nostrils,

Ah to be a slave to the noble gluttony.

 

These are mine not yours trinkets of time,

No scraps or dirt, on which you may feed,

This house, your life forever my possessions,

I falter to no king, except the horrid greed.

 

Lay back and don’t move for slaves you have,

A groom of the stool you may have forgot,

Command your every whim be counted,

Relax and grow fatter you queen of sloth.

 

Send army’s among the fowl peasants,

Tear their children into skins for the bath,

Make men be dogs and dogs eat filth,

I command you renew my home of wrath.

 

That w***e lays with my love in his bed,

Those brats get everything from the pious,

A heart life I have with none of the joys,

I seethe at the riches with green envious.

 

I hold my head above all other nobles,

I will hunt for the glory of myself and my side,

Millions adore me and my chest will be out,

For I am the only and true son of pride.

 

A mirror can show you my gallant reflection,

The beauty of the world perfectly insane,

A woman like no other to ever been seen,

Her combs are weaved from hands of the vain.

Author's Note

Be honest and true my darlings.

Reviews

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

'That w***e lays with my love in my his bed,' I suggest you take out the extra my (lol)
I love how you encorporated the 7 sins throughout the stanzas as how they are. Greed, pride, gluttony, wrath, sloth, envy, and lust.
It was a great read, but I love the last stanza

"A mirror can show you my gallant reflection,
The beauty of the world perfectly insane,
A woman like no other to ever been seen,
Her combs are weaved from hands of the vain."
I just love how it's written. Flows right together
Great read! (:

-Marie-

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

just brilliant loved it

[Tkess]

Like a modern day Dante's Inferno. Each stanza very cleaver and well done.

[Dayran]

Gaurs in the pool at the Beverly Wilshire. Born in a manger for the truth.

[light and ashes]

Wow, you painted very strong visions of the deadly sins. This is a phenomenal poem.

[Gitana Deneff]

I love it so much. Keep sending me read requests. I enjoy your poems so much. especially when they're so raw. (i need to find a new word to say instead of raw haha)

[Luke Ritta]

I enjoyed this.....good work.

[Uc Amalu Jr]

Wonderful!
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[Valentine]

Your writing is fine but you started out with one thought and finished up with a completely different ending than expected..lol and God bless...Kathie

[asdarkeyesclose]

This one fairly flies. Stirring poetry and great rhyme :)

[Muse]

How you can be so raw.....border-line vulgar, yet it is so beautifully penned. The 7 deadly sins will always be tested by mankind, in it's definition, testing the limits of ones damnation and salvation.