Magicks!!!

A source battle of world importance, I am just playing with ideas really.

Bemused intolerance to the fools of the earth,

Perusing the lands of magical inspection,

Retarded thoughts fling between us two,

A light had beamed a tiresome reaction.

 

Green hands lace air as toxic folds with death,

Mirrored eyes show mercy for the sun,

Veins make her happy when busted closed,

A child, a man, a death for mere fun.

 

Make haste at water’s edge in dessert storms,

She comes to find the dead as they rise third,

A locket captures the essence of tiny mortals,

In war not even soldiers are really heard.

 

Battles are waged away from human grasp,

The ending will come like floods to the dam,

Raised hero’s will mark us for protection,

A might evil is placed in the stars, a horned ram.

 

 

Author's Note

Be honest as always

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. You need to expand and tell the complete story. I like the honest and strong words in this poem. I like how you can make your point with proper language and strong words.
"Make haste at water’s edge in dessert storms,
She comes to find the dead as they rise third,
A locket captures the essence of tiny mortals,
In war not even soldiers are really heard."
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Cody]

This was great! It wasn't really my kind of a poem, but I really enjoyed the illusion of imagery that you used here. I like your style. (:

[Rene Velez]

great images and rhyme, war and it's ugliness revealed...

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

Man. I like this. It's so full of imagery and everything.

"Green hands lace air as toxic folds with death,

Mirrored eyes show mercy for the sun,

Veins make her happy when busted closed,

A child, a man, a death for mere fun."
Just wow, on this. I like how you explained things. Got me actually pulled in (:

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I'm glad you enjoyed it.