Free.

Just a piece I've been working on, a human sense of purpose I think!

A cat's purr brings light to my sleep,

A tussle and coarse carpet I feel,

A man holding whats love to his soul,

A fire does skip and dance the reel.

 

A glass of plump wine sits in my gut,

A mind is swimming for thoughts broken,

A friends is never far away from me,

A truth is felt hard in time when spoken.

 

A kiss has stained my lips on this night,

A touch sends skin to breath the air,

A look of sensual longing eats at me core,

A chase I walked upon to be clearly fair.

 

A door did open a life for two not one,

A window has closed on battered quite,

A house is no longer just curtains and shelfs,

A home has settled on us this dark night.

 

A love of sex and flesh has bound me to you,

A caring smile has locked my heart with a key,

A tired mind will now rest for some time,

A spirit is flying in tandum for it's free.

Author's Note

As always be honest and true!

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

We all have something that if we acquire it, it has a way of making us feel as if we have been set free. I think of acceptance for when we find that one person who accepts us totally for who we are we then in turn feel free to be us. Having that wine in your gut, with satisfied flesh enjoy what is yours in your realm is totally a feeling of freedom and I am glad you have found it within loves touch.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

A poem with fill with great passion and love!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I loved some the lines you used in this piece. Great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of statements. Each with a purpose and reason.
"A kiss has stained my lips on this night,
A touch sends skin to breath the air,
A look of sensual longing eats at me core,
A chase I walked upon to be clearly fair."
When we desire nothing. What are we. Desire and need give us a reason to be alive. Thank you for a powerful poem.
Coyote

[LetMeLaughLetMeSing]

Oh my. I have read so much poetry that has tried to do what you just... did. Keep doing these amazing things you do! Fantastical job!

[Rene Velez]

a strong poem of love and relationships, beautifully brought about with well crafted words...

[obvious pseudonym]

full of acceptance and truth. a model to live your life on. freedom we live for it we fight for it. it makes us who we are for without freedom of our own choices i would be just like the next

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

interesting four line structure I liked this poem especially the last 4 lines well done

[Muse]

A spirit is flying in tandum for it's free.
WOW
This was clever in its awesomeness on so many artistic levels.

[Tkess]

Interesting write. I like the structure of this one. It has a very nice flow to it.

[Judy Ponceby]

excellent write. images of those things close to the heart flowing by smoothly.