Celtic Minds of Chromas

A collaboration between my self and Chris Smith - enjoy!

Casted forth through feeling never to find,

Open your eyes to one such as his master,

Think quick as you know his wit is faster,

Frozen thoughts never moving in blood,

Cast away in the ignorance of plain flood,

Relax thy spirit and broaden your eye,

Take kindly for children not to die.

The words come flowing outside

Where the mind tries to confide

Two styles different but connected

Find that purpose that is collected

Friends that share words to all

Friends that are answering the call

This is something that is now there

A unison of minds joining to share.

Solid highs break free from the sky,

A winged creature sets forth to fly,

So bitter our enemy's in trench's old,

The new beginning does start so bold,

Words of fresh feeling taste our lip,

Taking fast as to reach there tip.

The sword can never stop the pen

Souls of the bravest of men

They throw at us their strongest stone

But we will never stand here alone

Where ever we are, on distant shore

They win a battle but never the war.

Chris Smith Welshpoetcs  and  Thomas Fitzgerald

Reviews

[Helpless]

Solid highs break free from the sky,
A winged creature sets forth to fly,
So bitter our enemy's in trench's old,
The new beginning does start so bold,

this is a great stanza! nice work on the whole poem! very impressive!

[Muse]

Perfect for Memorial Day. Men and Woman fight for us so we can keep our freedom of thought, freedom to write, freedom of speech, this is a great testimate for those today that think of pain, loves lost, hope for their loved ones to return home.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Love this. I have been reading Chris for awhile and I am pretty sure which parts are his, but you guys did a great job of blending in this fabulous piece. :)

[brenda]

this is such a good poem!! i lved this !!!! i realy liked it 100/100!!! loved it

[Lily Mae]

This is a great co~write.. I love the combining of two different styles to create one awesome write.. xx

[Hello, Goodbye]

great collab.. great result..

[Aidz]

Worked well and had a nice pace to it

[Kathryn]

I loved this! The consistant rhyming gives it a steady rhythm nd pace, and te languae used realy puts the message across. This is a really enpowering piece, well done :)

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

What a brillant write/ collaboration. The imagery was great, the flow of the pen felt as one. Nice job. xo