Celtic Minds of Chromas

A collaboration between my self and Chris Smith - enjoy!

Casted forth through feeling never to find,

Open your eyes to one such as his master,

Think quick as you know his wit is faster,

Frozen thoughts never moving in blood,

Cast away in the ignorance of plain flood,

Relax thy spirit and broaden your eye,

Take kindly for children not to die.

The words come flowing outside

Where the mind tries to confide

Two styles different but connected

Find that purpose that is collected

Friends that share words to all

Friends that are answering the call

This is something that is now there

A unison of minds joining to share.

Solid highs break free from the sky,

A winged creature sets forth to fly,

So bitter our enemy's in trench's old,

The new beginning does start so bold,

Words of fresh feeling taste our lip,

Taking fast as to reach there tip.

The sword can never stop the pen

Souls of the bravest of men

They throw at us their strongest stone

But we will never stand here alone

Where ever we are, on distant shore

They win a battle but never the war.

Chris Smith Welshpoetcs  and  Thomas Fitzgerald

Reviews

[sarah]

Wow the last stanza was incredible my favorite part fantastic work! this is a great poem!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Well done! Kudos on the cadence and message alike...Thanks for sharing.

[Elijah Gleaves]

The two things that captured a reader's mind in a poem are the initial line and the final line. You started strong and finished strong there's nothing more you can ask of a writer

[Max]

I think the last line is rather brilliant, and does what a final line should: sums up the whole poem. Great read! The pen always triumphs over the sword :)

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Another great collaboration. Your styles mixed so well that I didnt even know you collaborated til I read the end. Great write!

[Poetic Beauty]

My favorite line is "The sword can never stop the pen."
Writing is a very useful tool to get messages and ideas across. We have the freedom to write our thoughts down even if they aren't politically correct. We have the ability to write about the horrors we have scene or the beauty in the world. You can break us physically but you can never take away our thoughts.

[Searching 4 Serenity]

The blending of each stanza is almost as one!

[kdpgrahi]

A good piece of poetry to rad and enjoy

[WordNerd]

This is AWESOME :D I love the line "The sword can never stop the pen" LOVE IT. Excellent Job!

[Gitana Deneff]

I like the line that says "the sword can never stop the pen". This poem was very enlightening.