Letter of the Un-forgiven.

A study of those blind to faith and reason.

Slated stone crushed under a worn foot,

 walking lands as arcane to travelling new,

Poised plants sully the roads of old,

 doctors failed those praying on few.

Tattered houses align a single mile,

 discussions hushed and silence the young,

Broken memories kill the very heart,

 the old women with a woven and vinyl tongue.

A low rise hill holds the death of saints,

 women mourn and cry tears for all,

Pictured captured in scenes slackened,

 more hopes are needed to reach the tall.

Failed fears of children scream loose,

 bright stars have fallen on those men,

A door held open for and by the divine,

 Simple thoughts are key in time ten.

Author's Note

Read and re-read at your will, it is a new style and a new look at an old theme.

Reviews

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I'm not sure, but I may have noticed some minor errors within the piece, but regardless I think I got the jist of this after a couple of reads. IMHO, I think their are more people way too open to faith and reason, and bring religiousness a little too far and insane...while others dont have enough. Not sure if I'm making sense, religion is a touchy subject but I thought this was a great write.

[Draven]

That was truely awsome. I also love the rhyme scheme

[Rene Velez]

interesting read, the style and flow are unique, but then again I expect no less.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Pretty good! I'm going to have to add this as a favorite!

[Tamia123]

A different style and take for sure! But none the less amazing! Good Job!

[Mark D]

The style is nothing short of brilliant in my opinion. It made for such an interesting read and definitely provoked lots of thoughts and images. So very open to interpretation and I guess that is what you are shooting for.

Very much enjoyed. Thank you

[Raven Starhawk]

Honestly I have read this quite a few times, never knew exactly what to type but knew I had to comment. You have such a interesting hand at writing.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such an intelligent and masterfully crafted piece,
pure talent show here :D

[hmm]

interesting read here, nicely done!

[paradise]

it was an interesting poem