THOMAS

A simple and sweet description of yours truly!

Thomas has a sharp and twisted mind,

Happens to trust few to be kind,

Others like to look on in fascination,

Mothers few have his creation,

Angelic he clearly never will be,

Sarcastically bitchy as you will see.

Author's Note

Clearly just a bit of fun!

Reviews

[Vanessa Rico]

LOVE THIS! I especially love the "sarcastically bitchy as you will see"!! This was so inventive hun! I really enjoyed this and I am glad that you had fun with it! Sometimes writers focus on being too perfect and they forget their creativity and to have fun with words! Stunning as always!

[Ruth]

LOL Well....we are who we are love......LOVE it! xx

[TJ]

lol nice

[Joshua J. Certain]

Very artistic and clever here Thomas loved this (^_^)

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this! :D totally great. Alot like me in ways. I love how short and sweet and to the point this is. It made me laugh (:

[☯]

I love this! It witty and fun to read. A very creative and exciting read. It definitely put a smile on my face. :)

[roy mccarthy]

cool! you did well here!
i like your originality thomas,
we get so much cliche save the world crap on this site sometimes,
but you keep it dark and boundry pushing!
great write again!

[Valentine]

Luckily your first name is not shorter..Mine is long and words could not exzpress me as I am not any of those things your really not either..Kathie

[Revolutionary]

Ok so I am made to think of a little gay boy.You know the kid that you just cantell when he beats all the little girls at the hoola hoop contest.
I get this from the others looking on in fascination ,few mothers creation,and the sarcasticaly bitchy.I just pictured Thomas as that little boy.Great poem.I am sure you might not have meant Thomas that way but I am a strange reader.Just see what I see.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Awesome Thomas!