THOMAS

A simple and sweet description of yours truly!

Thomas has a sharp and twisted mind,

Happens to trust few to be kind,

Others like to look on in fascination,

Mothers few have his creation,

Angelic he clearly never will be,

Sarcastically bitchy as you will see.

Author's Note

Clearly just a bit of fun!

Reviews

[Vanessa Rico]

LOVE THIS! I especially love the "sarcastically bitchy as you will see"!! This was so inventive hun! I really enjoyed this and I am glad that you had fun with it! Sometimes writers focus on being too perfect and they forget their creativity and to have fun with words! Stunning as always!

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Humble to others and himself
Eager to please and be pleased
Never wants to cause problems
Ready to comfort the crying
Yearning for love and understanding

THANKS for inspiration! ^_^

[*[_Natasha_]*]

love this! :) fun lil poem indeed

[BlackCl0ud]

Laughable and light.

[An owl on the moon]

You cut right to the heart of the matter and give us all the insight we need to see within the poet. Sharp edged for sure!

[brenda]

lol! this is a great acrostic poem!

[Muse]

Interesting spin on poetry I have yet to try. Thanks for the new inspiration!

[Duane Klinger]

Haha! Well done, Thomas. It made me laugh pretty hard. Glad you're having fun! I agree with Vanessa, a lot of writers forget to have fun with words and the gift that they're given. I see such a broad spectrum in your work that I've come to appreciate in just a few short days. Well done, friend!

[KrisK]

Fun, creative, visual...got me thinking what I would write...thanks for all that you share

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Thomas, you are a master of the Acrostic ; )

[ShaneBerry]

i used to love doing these, and i always hated how people used to do completely obvious word choice for their names... you did not do that! this is a very original and vibrant look into what you think of yourself! very nice and sassy!

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