One Morning.

I am playing with imagery today, looking out my window and spotting the hidden beauty.

The slightest breeze makes waves of green tender branches,

A backdrop of grey, blue and white dazzles my human eye,

Our Mother lays beauty at our doorstep each morning,

With a full and magical sense of a playful sky.

The smell of dewed grass hits the nose with joy,

Many lives are grown and sustained within her earth,

Tread softly upon her yielding surface always,

Remember that the ground gives glorious birth.

Though seasons may change the palate before me,

I dance and sing for the excitement of it all,

Tomorrow bring a new hope of serenity,

How I yearn to hear her, our Mother's call.

Author's Note

As anyone who reads me often will know, this is not my usual style, but I think it's important to break out of one's shell, at least every now and then, enjoy!

Reviews

[BlackCl0ud]

It may not be your usual style but it is a joy to read, the cool rhymes themselves give an image to my mind and the nature aspects only help. Wonderful, I'm a little sad you don't write like this often, so when you do I'll cherish the words more than any other. ~ BlackCl0ud

[argentum lumen]

definitely different from your usual style, but I liked it. Well penned write.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Wonderful dive into the beauty and ever-presence of nature/mother earth. Very well done.

[Mika Haruna]

Yes, it is not your usual style, but neverhteless you have mastered it, fantastic job once again

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

This is something I wish would come out of my head sometimes, oh well can't force greatness. This is excellent. Great write!

[quinfinn]

excellent write and yes, a departure from your norm, very nicely done!

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as only seen through the eyes of a poet..you convey the magic and awe of the divine mother Earth..in all her splendid glory..lovely

[Joshua J. Certain]

So inspireing and written so delicately very great poem (^_^)

[Ben Taylor]

This was a beautiful poem; very in touch with nature. Also, the rhyming was well done. Nature is a beautiful thing :)

[Judy Ponceby]

I think you had a lovely venture out of your shell! :) Wonderful descriptions :)