One Morning.

I am playing with imagery today, looking out my window and spotting the hidden beauty.

The slightest breeze makes waves of green tender branches,

A backdrop of grey, blue and white dazzles my human eye,

Our Mother lays beauty at our doorstep each morning,

With a full and magical sense of a playful sky.

The smell of dewed grass hits the nose with joy,

Many lives are grown and sustained within her earth,

Tread softly upon her yielding surface always,

Remember that the ground gives glorious birth.

Though seasons may change the palate before me,

I dance and sing for the excitement of it all,

Tomorrow bring a new hope of serenity,

How I yearn to hear her, our Mother's call.

Author's Note

As anyone who reads me often will know, this is not my usual style, but I think it's important to break out of one's shell, at least every now and then, enjoy!

Reviews

[BlackCl0ud]

It may not be your usual style but it is a joy to read, the cool rhymes themselves give an image to my mind and the nature aspects only help. Wonderful, I'm a little sad you don't write like this often, so when you do I'll cherish the words more than any other. ~ BlackCl0ud

[Tommy]

I think you did a great job man! The rhyme works smooth, and keeps the rhythm at pace. Mother Nature is the greatest artist isn’t she…

Great Spring Time Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[brenda]

its really great i feel like you in this poem i think people can realte to this the how the seasons change but new style yet still great!:)

[Sylo's Rose]

this is very good. I enjoyed the diverity.

[Hayley]

I agree, and you did a very nice job! I love the beauty of each line, and the rhymes were pleasant. The descriptions were great as well :) Personally I think whatever style you would write you would be awesome!

I found this to be rather touching and because I love to use poems at the beginning of my writing it was a joy for me to read.

[paul]

wow. very beautiful and touching, and a great reminder

[Valentine]

Nothing like mother nature or as I call the eye views around me..God'sd paintings..Lovely write..Katihe

[Fairytale]

Fantastic imagery. Robust, rich description. I enjoyed reading this one.

[WynterPhoenix]

This is beautifully constructed. I enjoyed reading this.

[harley]

u r right this is not ur normall style but it was an amazing read. the flow of it all was amazing as always one of the best poems i have read today.