One Morning.

I am playing with imagery today, looking out my window and spotting the hidden beauty.

The slightest breeze makes waves of green tender branches,

A backdrop of grey, blue and white dazzles my human eye,

Our Mother lays beauty at our doorstep each morning,

With a full and magical sense of a playful sky.

The smell of dewed grass hits the nose with joy,

Many lives are grown and sustained within her earth,

Tread softly upon her yielding surface always,

Remember that the ground gives glorious birth.

Though seasons may change the palate before me,

I dance and sing for the excitement of it all,

Tomorrow bring a new hope of serenity,

How I yearn to hear her, our Mother's call.

Author's Note

As anyone who reads me often will know, this is not my usual style, but I think it's important to break out of one's shell, at least every now and then, enjoy!

Reviews

[BlackCl0ud]

It may not be your usual style but it is a joy to read, the cool rhymes themselves give an image to my mind and the nature aspects only help. Wonderful, I'm a little sad you don't write like this often, so when you do I'll cherish the words more than any other. ~ BlackCl0ud

[Weepingmoon]

Change is as good as a holliday? Lovely read!

[Redolent Quill]

beautiful write ... never enough of celebrating the miracles of each day's gifts; quiet laid in our threshold ...

[CagedBIRDsings]

It was vivid. Amazing imagery! I absolutely love this one. It is a bit different from what you usually write but I like that you stepped out of your comfort zone to explore another side of your writing. Well Done!

[-Scribe in Style-]

This is a good composition. There is a personal style and a well chosen mixture of words and imagery.

[Ladysue]

I for one like the images and the sentiment..beautiful..

[Coyote Poetry]

A positive and beautiful poem. Some memories are needed for us to know balance and reason we are alive. I like your description in your words. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[∂αʌ<..]

it may be your 'unusual' style but you did ravishingly well!
i love it!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This is glorious!

[KAREN]

Beautiful memories of a mother. This is heartfelt and written with love. Excellent!!

[Siddhartha]

This is a wonderful break from your original style. this resonates with beauty and hope and the harmony of being one with mother nature.