The Walk.

A study that leans into the eternal questions that plague all of us.

The first step they say is the hardest, I dont,

Being born, slip, blood and push, it's clear,

No knowledge cleary is complete bliss,

God bless innocence and youth no fear.

A touch harder those moments of friendship,

Are you a lover or a fighter or both, I know,

We claim alliance and war on both lovers,

At the end we yearn for any and stay low.

Be we spirits or ghosts maybe the same thing,

We see perfection and ending, id God there,

Ah it may all be useless and we cease to be,

Just love your loved one and remember to care.

Author's Note

Just another synaptic mis-fire, have fun

Reviews

[quinfinn]

how very true are these words... and very eloquently written. yes, thomas, i like this side of you much better. it shows me a bit of your ethics and your emotional
horizons. i love a poem that allows me to see inside a person,s heart and mind.
this one does it nicely. good job!

[☯]

Nice perspective of things. I like how you started off with the reasoning that you believe something other than what others do. It completely pulled me in. This poem really gives courage and hope, it tells and also recites. I really liked it, great job :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I do believe that main idea here is to love and care.......excellent!