The Walk.

A study that leans into the eternal questions that plague all of us.

The first step they say is the hardest, I dont,

Being born, slip, blood and push, it's clear,

No knowledge cleary is complete bliss,

God bless innocence and youth no fear.

A touch harder those moments of friendship,

Are you a lover or a fighter or both, I know,

We claim alliance and war on both lovers,

At the end we yearn for any and stay low.

Be we spirits or ghosts maybe the same thing,

We see perfection and ending, id God there,

Ah it may all be useless and we cease to be,

Just love your loved one and remember to care.

Author's Note

Just another synaptic mis-fire, have fun

Reviews

[quinfinn]

how very true are these words... and very eloquently written. yes, thomas, i like this side of you much better. it shows me a bit of your ethics and your emotional
horizons. i love a poem that allows me to see inside a person,s heart and mind.
this one does it nicely. good job!

[Mika Haruna]

I think this is so true, a very moving peice i love the emotions presented
srry, im not a very good reveiwer! X3

[∂αʌ<..]

just love your loved one and remember to care---->so true!

[Cynthia]

Truth is in your words, a very great poem! I love the starting of it, first step can be hard, but its the step which takes the most courage! I love the knowledge you put in your poem, its an encouraging feel to me )
I love this poem, the message behind, and the idea of it,
nice written!

[Dillon Cotter]

Very inspiring and true. The first step can be the hardest, but the best step to make. This is a honest write that is meaningful and great. Nice work bro.

Will

[Fairytale]

Interesting take on humanity. I like what you said about spirits or ghosts.

[Helpless]

very inspiring!

[WynterPhoenix]

Inspiring!

[brenda]

well i am too caring! but i loved your poem it really good 1:)