The Walk.

A study that leans into the eternal questions that plague all of us.

The first step they say is the hardest, I dont,

Being born, slip, blood and push, it's clear,

No knowledge cleary is complete bliss,

God bless innocence and youth no fear.

A touch harder those moments of friendship,

Are you a lover or a fighter or both, I know,

We claim alliance and war on both lovers,

At the end we yearn for any and stay low.

Be we spirits or ghosts maybe the same thing,

We see perfection and ending, id God there,

Ah it may all be useless and we cease to be,

Just love your loved one and remember to care.

Author's Note

Just another synaptic mis-fire, have fun

Reviews

[quinfinn]

how very true are these words... and very eloquently written. yes, thomas, i like this side of you much better. it shows me a bit of your ethics and your emotional
horizons. i love a poem that allows me to see inside a person,s heart and mind.
this one does it nicely. good job!

[-Scribe in Style-]

I love this!
Def a well written piece.
Something I can really relate to. Thanks for sharing your work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your last lines are very true. Kindness and love is remembered. I gave up on trying to figure out the right and wrong of life a long time ago. Better to live each day and be thankful for family and good friends. A excellent poem.
"Just love your loved one and remember to care."
Coyote

that was very good so amazing.

[Ruth]

Being born, yes......easy in comparison! Love, this is awesome, a perfect dose of reality once more! xx

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very true and awe inspiring.... wonderful..

[Vanessa Rico]

Thomas! You seize to dazzle me with your poetic words. I am always amazed whenever I read something new by you! You keep stunning me with the depth of emotion that you can portray and in turn make me feel! Such a talent you have! Much love to you! (shhh...and dont tell anyone...a 100 from me!)

[Sylo's Rose]

this obe is very enteresting. its like you know what was thinking.

[Fabric Pulse]

"Just love your loved one and remember to care..." Powerfully put and so beautifully composed. Not lacking much of anything if anything at all period! Great write of treasures within.

[Valentine]

Yes God is real, and He healed me of 10 years of seizures..I think trust in any relationship is one of the hardest things to grasp as there are so many opportunities to turn wrong when we should have turned Right...Kathie

[Ame Rain]

i like it :)
*Just love your loved one and remember to care.*

very good advice XP .
keep writing ^^