Perfection.

A study of religion.

Pray to heaven,

Forsake a hell,

Making noises,

A man to tell,

A hollow dome, 

A marble altar,

Smoking incense,

Amen to falter.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[My Fair Lady]

Life studies through your uniquely beautiful eyes...much enjoyed.

[A]

This was great, makes one really wonder, inspirational and somehow ironic, lovely write.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

so many traditions and rules are man made are they not? Excellent piece

[Sylo's Rose]

Very interesting. I like it.

[just rose.]

I see the incisive irony in this. What do we do when all the traditions that are meant to bolster us are hollow? Or perhaps this is my own bias reading into it. This contains both a deep connection and reverence for the trappings of the church, and a sense that what really matters is not contained within them.

[raindroplove]

verry good:)

[Sujash I. Purna]

marvellous!

[Sukriti Suki]

good...can be interpreted in so many ways..but essentially religion is this.

[JENY]

it is simple...humble...and beautiful....
liked it...