Thomas.
A Poem by
Thomas Fitzgerald
A study of me.
Tommy was bold,
Tommy was cute,
Tommy was fine,
Tommy played flute.
Gay was Tommy,
Sexy was Tommy,
Men he had Tommy,
Afraid he wasn't Tommy.
© 2011 Thomas Fitzgerald
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I really enjoyed that little contrast you had, as if the first stanza described childhood Tommy, and the second one described the grown up Tommy. And also the way you described the childhood innocence, and then a little bit of adult naughtiness, and also your happiness and high self-esteem, and this shows how important it is to love oneself. I love this succinct write, and yet there is great meaning behind it. I enjoyed reading.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Wow! Awesome poem, simple words, yet very vivid. And you are fearless:)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Wow! Awesome poem, simple words, yet very vivid. And you are fearless:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Honest, so openly, very revealing this is! I adore it. Confidence is key!
Great write!
Nicely done!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Honest, so openly, very revealing this is! I adore it. Confidence is key!
Great write!
Nicely done!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I'm interested in the way you're using traditional rhyme structures subversively to convey all kinds of awesome bad-a*s attitude. well done.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I'm interested in the way you're using traditional rhyme structures subversively to convey all kinds of awesome bad-ass attitude. well done.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is assertive and confident. Confidence dents universe and creates a space for itself. you have done a nice job here.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is assertive and confident. Confidence dents universe and creates a space for itself. you have done a nice job here.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I like this.. self examination, revealing.. honest and open.. I love that.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I like this.. self examination, revealing.. honest and open.. I love that.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
strong and delicate..extremely good piece.
Posted 13 Years Ago
strong and delicate..extremely good piece.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Leaps off the screen with clarity and moxie, the
Tommy,
Tommy,
Tommy,
Tommy.
repetition works vary well,
100/100
Rossen
Posted 13 Years Ago
Leaps off the screen with clarity and moxie, the
Tommy,
Tommy,
Tommy,
Tommy.
repetition works vary well,
100/100
Rossen
1 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Original, and very bold. The last sentence in particular expresses the whole piece.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Original, and very bold. The last sentence in particular expresses the whole piece.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
:) Last line is the "it" of this piece for me. Fear can eclipse all of the other wonderful things about a person. Remove the fear....see the wonder. Good stuff.
Cheers! R.G.
Posted 13 Years Ago
:) Last line is the "it" of this piece for me. Fear can eclipse all of the other wonderful things about a person. Remove the fear....see the wonder. Good stuff.
Cheers! R.G.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Thomas Fitzgerald Wexford, Leinster, Ireland
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