Thomas.

A study of me.

Tommy was bold, 

Tommy was cute,

Tommy was fine,

Tommy played flute.

Gay was Tommy,

Sexy was Tommy,

Men he had Tommy,

Afraid he wasn't Tommy.

Reviews

[reflectingus]

I really enjoyed that little contrast you had, as if the first stanza described childhood Tommy, and the second one described the grown up Tommy. And also the way you described the childhood innocence, and then a little bit of adult naughtiness, and also your happiness and high self-esteem, and this shows how important it is to love oneself. I love this succinct write, and yet there is great meaning behind it. I enjoyed reading.

[I Shred This Cabbage]

hmm pretty bizarre! enjoyable in its way...

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Sweet and short, but you might also add: Proud was Tommy.

[Aella.lives]

It's great to know oneself, and you seem to know yourself wonderfully! Great write!! ;)

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Short and interesting, good writing.
And "Sexy was Tommy" made me laugh a bit, positive laugh of course!

[Emerald Seas]

Tommy can carry a tune! Cute read...

[?]

I agree..honest and open and what better way to be...
Well done

[The White Wolf]

Tommy is downright adorable! He is one of my favorite people on the whole entire planet!

[Chris]

I don't know Tom... I think there have been moments in your life when you understood quite well the feeling of "fear" and its affects on you. Only a fool feels no fear... the person has to deal with theirs as best they can.

[Calypso]

You sound interesting

[khalid]

very nicely written, simple with music tune