The Kiss.

A look at the way we communicate through touch.

Fantastic, sweet, shy and plump,

Ravishing, kind, swept and deep,

A kiss might but just a kiss,

But this was mine to keep.

Wet, thrilling, exotic and dazzling,

Foreign, common, away and home,

His smile was reckless yet divine,

Like the Christened Chapel in Rome.

Angry, violent, pale and weak,

Pulsing, dead, racing and stopped,

His star was piercing and tame,

So much so my heart just popped.

Reviews

[LA Lorena]

first: typos last line *hear* needs a t
3rd line, *bu* needs a t

Loved this Thomas...so much can be said and gleaned from just a kiss. Well done!

[brenda]

nice description throughout the poem good poem!!:)

[Ladysue]

you have just spoken the unspoken wonderfully...excellent work...

[☯]

Very very nicely described :) And an adorable romance.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

definitely playfully romantic

[Fabric Pulse]

Playfully romantic.

[Andrea Vargas]

The kiss. definatley sent some emotion chills down my spine! I love it!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Great poem.

[kastone]

nice piece..lots of kisses described.makes me want to run home to my girlfriend.

[hopelove]

reminded me of a time with my boyfriend