Rock to a Child.

A look through the eyes of an innocent.

Clear running water,

A mountain my home,

My life century long,

My owner a gnome.

A rock to a child,

Peaceful and blue,

Rough to a point,

A pebble to you.

Reviews

[The White Wolf]

I really like this, Thomas. It seems very much about perception and how it differs from childhood to being an adult. A pebble would be a pebble in an adults hand, wouldn't it? To a child, a huge and heavy rock. I very much like this analogy. Nicely written, my friend.

[Sukriti Suki]

Nice. It is very innocent and the look from a child eyes is always the true one..Very sweet.

[Coyote Poetry]

My Grandson of two years old. When he see something new. He said "Wow"'. To have the vision of a child and appreciate the beauty of this world without fear. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[raindroplove]

very good

[Fabric Pulse]

Short, simple, sweet, no other way for this rhyme to come out as.