I really like this, Thomas. It seems very much about perception and how it differs from childhood to being an adult. A pebble would be a pebble in an adults hand, wouldn't it? To a child, a huge and heavy rock. I very much like this analogy. Nicely written, my friend.
life seems so forever when we're kids; not equipped to understand that it ends. I went back to the house I spent my early childhood in and was amazed how small it really was. It seems almost castle like in my memories.
Great piece, wanted it to go on, " but all good things must..."
Interesting, very original, i loved the 3 points of view you were able to give us in such a short poem (that's talent, man !!): The rock's (Stanza 1), the Child's (verses 5-7), and our's, where we stand for boring grown ups adults xD (verse 8)
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