Evil in You.

A leap of faith, failed.

Soaring into darkness,

Eyes full, red,

Blade good, sharp,

He'll end in a bed,

Teeth pointed and ready,

Silence a in drop,

Slicing through flesh,

Hear the heart pop.

Soul trapped to violence,

The earth had bound,

A spirit unsettled,

His body now found.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

morbid and eerie, compelling and ritualistic . great write!

[Matthew Kult]

This gives a great feel to the beginning of a possession. I like the chilling effect you have in your writing style. It's always a joy to see dark writers(writing quality).

Steady flow, like the pace. Invigorating!

Matthew

[Emily B]

there is power in the word, wonderful, dark and deep

[RJM Corbet]

Thanks for reading my stuff. Now I'm reading through yours. I don't have a lot of computer time. I like this one. Wonder where it came from. The power of (just a few) words ...