. . . to put it into words . . .
A Story by
Thomas Fitzgerald
a study of words we keep using
. . . A fear is no longer a fear if
you don't fear it . . .
. . . Is love really a love if it
can't grow . .
. . . Sound isn't heard unless it is
felt . . .
. . . Politeness is scapegoat for
jealousy / anger / revenge . . .
. . . You cannot choose who you fall
in love with you can only love them . . .
. . . Does love end in death? - Simply
no . . .
. . . The thin line between love and
hate - what would be its name? - fear . . .
. . . What is the outcome of falling
in love? Some say "respect" others "managing", I say
harmony . . .
© 2012 Thomas Fitzgerald
Author's Note
Well I think I have fixed the typo's!
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I absolutely have great respect for peices like this one. So much thought, so much meaning all expressed in the simplest of ways. A simple path that hits your heart and mind in places that make you feel and think about what is being delivered by the writer.
WELL DONE!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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ponder of words with flowing ideas
=]
Posted 11 Years Ago
ponder of words with flowing ideas
=]
I liked it, didn't see any typos, and agree with everything but the politeness is scapegoat line. Maybe I'm overly optimistic though :P
Posted 12 Years Ago
I liked it, didn't see any typos, and agree with everything but the politeness is scapegoat line. Maybe I'm overly optimistic though :P
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
It looks fix to me and I love it. Really all the lines just speak their own things and though, and you're right. ITs a good format and spoken voice of your own. Anyways well done, I'm speechless.
Posted 12 Years Ago
It looks fix to me and I love it. Really all the lines just speak their own things and though, and you're right. ITs a good format and spoken voice of your own. Anyways well done, I'm speechless.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Nicely interpreted, sort of a yin-yang mix, wonderfully experimented
Posted 12 Years Ago
Nicely interpreted, sort of a yin-yang mix, wonderfully experimented
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Superb!
". . The thin line between love and hate - what would be its name? - fear . . ."...what a line!!!
♥ Mwah!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Superb!
". . The thin line between love and hate - what would be its name? - fear . . ."...what a line!!!
♥ Mwah!
Oh it is beautiful. A really well done story and it touches me deep inside my heart and soul how you portray this little story on falling in love. Lovely indeed!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Oh it is beautiful. A really well done story and it touches me deep inside my heart and soul how you portray this little story on falling in love. Lovely indeed!
I very much like this, the ideas behind it are quite simple, yet if you think about them for long, they become quite complicated. I especially love the first, second and fourth lines, though the fourth is my favorite. It's so very true!! Wonderful!
Posted 12 Years Ago
I very much like this, the ideas behind it are quite simple, yet if you think about them for long, they become quite complicated. I especially love the first, second and fourth lines, though the fourth is my favorite. It's so very true!! Wonderful!
wow!
very deep and well-thought out indeed
Posted 12 Years Ago
wow!
very deep and well-thought out indeed
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I echo what EmeraldFacet said--definitely worthy of respect. This piece is beautiful and thought-provoking, two prime elements in any writing.
I especially liked, ". . . You cannot choose who you fall in love with you can only love them . . ."
True indeed.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I echo what EmeraldFacet said--definitely worthy of respect. This piece is beautiful and thought-provoking, two prime elements in any writing.
I especially liked, ". . . You cannot choose who you fall in love with you can only love them . . ."
True indeed.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Well done indeed! You expressed so much in such a creative brilliant way!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Well done indeed! You expressed so much in such a creative brilliant way!
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