. . . to put it into words . . .

a study of words we keep using

. . . A fear is no longer a fear if you don't fear it . . .

 

 

. . . Is love really a love if it can't grow . .

 

 

. . . Sound isn't heard unless it is felt . . .

 

 

. . . Politeness is scapegoat for jealousy / anger / revenge . . .

 

 

. . . You cannot choose who you fall in love with you can only love them . . .

 

 

. . . Does love end in death? - Simply no . . .

 

 

. . . The thin line between love and hate - what would be its name? - fear . . .

 

 

. . . What is the outcome of falling in love? Some say "respect" others "managing", I say harmony . . .

 

Author's Note

Well I think I have fixed the typo's!

Reviews

[EmeraldFacet]

I absolutely have great respect for peices like this one. So much thought, so much meaning all expressed in the simplest of ways. A simple path that hits your heart and mind in places that make you feel and think about what is being delivered by the writer.
WELL DONE!!

[CHRIS ANDES]

ponder of words with flowing ideas
=]

[Mark]

I liked it, didn't see any typos, and agree with everything but the politeness is scapegoat line. Maybe I'm overly optimistic though :P

[Jazique]

It looks fix to me and I love it. Really all the lines just speak their own things and though, and you're right. ITs a good format and spoken voice of your own. Anyways well done, I'm speechless.

[silver threaded queen]

Nicely interpreted, sort of a yin-yang mix, wonderfully experimented

[Ruth]

Superb!
". . The thin line between love and hate - what would be its name? - fear . . ."...what a line!!!
♥ Mwah!

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Oh it is beautiful. A really well done story and it touches me deep inside my heart and soul how you portray this little story on falling in love. Lovely indeed!

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

I very much like this, the ideas behind it are quite simple, yet if you think about them for long, they become quite complicated. I especially love the first, second and fourth lines, though the fourth is my favorite. It's so very true!! Wonderful!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

wow!

very deep and well-thought out indeed

[The Scholar]

I echo what EmeraldFacet said--definitely worthy of respect. This piece is beautiful and thought-provoking, two prime elements in any writing.

I especially liked, ". . . You cannot choose who you fall in love with you can only love them . . ."
True indeed.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Well done indeed! You expressed so much in such a creative brilliant way!