Eyes Wide Open.

A risky experiment of words.

ONE

To sleep - is to dream,

To dream - is to think,

To think - is to feel,

To feel  - is to blink.

TWO

To touch - is to sense,

To sense - is to reach,

To reach - is to give,

To give - is to get.

THREE

The eye - is to see,

To see - is to live,

To live - is to die,

To die - is to end.

Author's Note

I'm just experimenting with different style, all thoughts welcome.

Reviews

[raindroplove]

very true

[Mashairi]

this is amazing. i love the action/reaction sense of it :)

[Tina Kline]

A visual with words how everything is connected, how one thing can lead to another. An excellent write! I like this style.

[An Ordinary Woman]

experimenting with different styles, that's wonderful. This is well thought out- very insightful. I enjoyed it a lot.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

To die_is the beginning..The beginning_Is the for____ev___er...Enjoyed reading your thoughts..Sunflower

[E.Gleaves]

I like how you relate things like sight to life and reaching to giving. It's like your displaying all the relationships that life has to offer. This is very experimental compared to other works I've read by you. The new style is refreshing.

[Tasha]

I liked this, its different but good different. I liked this style, keep up the good work. :)