Daisy Double.

As I've been cranking out the darker dept's of my mind lately, i decided to write something a little less, fire and brimstone - enjoy.

Two little daisy's, 

Alone in the grass,

Shaken and stirred,

By this very lass,

Small to the eye,

Large to the mind,

Smooth to the touch, 

A touch that is kind,

Blossom is late,

For this time of year,

It will come forth,

Never you fear.

Reviews

[Valentine]

Thomas, now this write of yours I really love. Didn't know you had a soft side. Valentine

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ha Ha thank you.

[Archia]

Sorry, I pressed submit on the first review before I finished it. I shall continue;
it made me think of a little playing in a field of daisy's in complete happiness. "Never you fear," that line holds so much hope.
All in all, such a beautiful poem.

[Archia]

I really enjoyed this; I loved the rhyme it made it flow so well. The whole thing was so beautiful.

[Artiste de Mots]

I love it! It tells a simple story, but makes it sound rather unique intriguing! Great job! :D

[E.Gleaves]

There's a typo in the second line you meant to type As on in the grass I think. This poem is touching the meaning I derived from it was patience, every flower bud (metaphorical buds included) will blossom one day.

[Sujash I. Purna]

I love your venturesome attitude with your poetry. You explore new things I see. This one's great!

[raindroplove]

very injoyable

[Vanessa Rico]

Loving this sweet side of you!!

[LA Lorena]

simplistic, but still blooms beautifully!

[RidingTheWind]

This shows you can write poems that aren't all dark and sinister, and you can write things that are a lot happier and to the same standard :) Great write