Hells Eye.

A tribute to seven.

The whithered lover,

Her torn bloody face,

One sight to the soul,

Once fast now paced.

The torn prince,

Flawless looks untouched,

A heart ripped open,

His feet now un-rushed,

The angry princess,

With scars on her chest,

Black eyes now piercing,

Evil at it's best.

Three soul's now trapped,

Three soul's ever bound,

Hell's eye is now open,

But where can it be found?

Reviews

[E.Gleaves]

I wanted more imagery. Your speaking about very deep dark things but it's hard for me to picture them as is. maybe that's how you intended the poem to be read? Another thing is in the end you have souls in the possessive like "soul's" I'm wondering if it's a typo or are you insinuating these souls are now being possessed by some evil. This is a interesting read and I'm already getting my on interpretation of it

[pamzilla. &hear..]

..We need more writers like you on this site.
This poem was dark which leads me to the dark things in my own mind.
I enjoyed how each person was given their own privacy of having their own paragraph but, at the end, was joined together.
Wonderful write :)

[Sean Eddingfield]

Dark things lurk within you... embrace them...

[RidingTheWind]

I love the way you've got a separate paragraph for each person, but the final one combines all three, showing they're in the same situation. Love it :)

[Angel's Lady]

Well, you definitely painted a most vivid picture with your words...metaphorical or not. Great write!

[Jill Wallflower]

I have to say I loved reading this. It is really good

[Coyote Poetry]

A very interesting poem. I feel there is a lot of hidden story in your words. I like how you described each person. I like the ending. You left me with many questions after reading the poem. Is it myth or truth? A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Beautifully defined !!! [ An evilness- So Panoramic ] Awesome Write...The Mystery of Three souls and the angry princess.
Good flow.....