I am reading this because I wrote a dated one too..I know this one's a tribute to someone who gave his life away, to make others lives more meaningful..there's agony in this poem, a tribute to the man's effort, his silent terminal endeavor which gets forgotten in the ebbs of time and events. I am glad at its existence and relevance, 20 years down the line :-)
F.G.F. Said I'm sure that much of the world is the same. I've only one thing to add... The world has always been this way. It isn't really race, creed, or bounderies... but the true war is rich vs. poor
This was a wonderful poem to remember Bobby Sands, and I found it quite easy to connect with it because of how you've worded it all. I hope you write more things like this
This was a beautiful tribute to your friend! Your poem shows the horrors of war of losing those close to you, because people have not learned tolerance. Great work!
I am reading this because I wrote a dated one too..I know this one's a tribute to someone who gave his life away, to make others lives more meaningful..there's agony in this poem, a tribute to the man's effort, his silent terminal endeavor which gets forgotten in the ebbs of time and events. I am glad at its existence and relevance, 20 years down the line :-)
To all who know by now - I love you.
For those that don't, I review a lot of work on here, and I expect the same in return, friend me but make sure to have conviction! I'm a horror writer mostly bu.. more..