Decision

Decision

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
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A working for you to figure out!

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A break through in memory,
A time lost forever,
A mind drawing blank,
Hands clasped together,
Prayer to the lord,
Weakened by fear,
Salvation is coming,
Disguised as a peer,
Alone on his decision,
Peeved by his judges,
Fallen off balance,
His partner he nudges,
The decision is made,
A mind put to rest,
The other cheek is now turned,
The bird in its nest.

© 2011 Thomas Fitzgerald


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Sometimes past memories can haunt us and make us feel like we did back then but with faith and dedication we can over come it. We may be alone in our decisions but what we decide affect us and sometimes those who care about us. We are the masters of our own fate. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Each person has their own belief system. Spirituality is a very personal thing. Your faith is your own to figure out and determine within yourself. I can not tell someone how to worship their God or whatever religion they practice. I only know that I believe in God and have a great faith in him to direct me.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love your imagery and deliberation. this is a delightful deviation from the norm.

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a novel concept, choice is undefinability!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Fluidity in motion; reflection loss, sadness. A past journey; perhaps not of choice. The fear of this choice, entwined possibly with lonliness and the decision having to be reluctantly made by the situation at hand.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you, I agree we are the masters of our own faith.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometimes past memories can haunt us and make us feel like we did back then but with faith and dedication we can over come it. We may be alone in our decisions but what we decide affect us and sometimes those who care about us. We are the masters of our own fate. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Thomas Fitzgerald
Thomas Fitzgerald

Wexford, Leinster, Ireland



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