Unwanted Poet

A look into the mirror!

Feeling of no-one,

Doubts in my mind,

Reluctant to stir,

Thoughts are unkind,

Pressures of elders,

Goals in focus,

Wants unheard of,

All hocus pocus,

Mind beckons answers,

Thoughts drawing blank,

Plane of entire misery,

From Billy to Frank,

Hills far away,

Silence he wrote,

A killing stone,

From the angry poet.

Author's Note

Simplicity is key!

Reviews

[R J Askew]

Yeah, no one cares much about poets, unless the do something outrageious or die young. Willam Blake ended in a paupers grave with about three people standing there to see him go. And Keats hardly sold a verse when he was alive. Byron of course was a b*****d. Yeah, no one wants us cos we say things that make them uncomfortable, or they are too stupid to understand us.

[Mauricio Montoya]

like how it comes together. Nice work.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Simplicity IS key. You are far from simple my friend, a complex soul with messages that scream, dig deep, even when you speak them plainly, simply. I love to hear you speak, Thomas, My Beloved Poet.

[Cancelled]

This poem is nice and simple! I will send this poem as a read request to so many of my friends! :)

[Demi Rose]

i liked this. i just don't know what to type. =T__T= u have a good poem here. i can oddly feel it and tell u i feel the same at times.

[Bidu Ibrahim]

Simplicity and complexity; the two sides of a coin! Interesting read.

[lostmymarbles487]

Simplicity is key. it leaves much for the mind to ponder making this an interesting read ^^

[Thea]

Great one...The poem was very flawless...I like the author's note, it's so true! Well done!
:)))

[SuicidePact.]

Nicely done.