Dear Fellow!

Dear Fellow!

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
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A look at that split second we through caution to the wind!

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Slipping nectar on yielding flesh abate,

Salted tears come hard  to the fore,

Reddish cheeks not used to smile,

Fall soft upon that polished wood floor.


Gaping silence just breath to be heard,

False truths give sweet kisses sold,

Backing all that we hold close today,

Now, now dear fellow how bold.


Perfect fingers lay heavy on painted thighs,

Tiny veins scream in speed to the skin,

Flaccid memories are far from us in time,

No people to bind him to kith and kin.


One last push to make promise of next time,

Head spinning rushes last all to short,

Gentle tapping on my bedroom door,

Makes us jump and think for now abort!

© 2014 Thomas Fitzgerald


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Thomas Fitzgerald
Be honest and striking as you always are my darlings!

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One last push to make promise of next time,
Head spinning rushes last all to short,
Gentle tapping on my bedroom door,
Makes us jump and think for now abort!

Well … it is certainly hot in here. A invigorating write, to say the least. You lucky, duck.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you.



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well you certainly painted a vivid picture in this write
had to look at my dictionary a time or two lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

lol,thank you x
 wordman

10 Years Ago

you are welcome my friend
Love the wording to this piece! Love the last stanza. nicely penned!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
KATHY SUE SILLS

10 Years Ago

My pleasure!
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B.J
I like the introduction, it says it all. Well penned. I enjoyed the read

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you.x
B.J

10 Years Ago

you're welcome
I find many versions of love within the write. IInd stanza`s one of my favorites. Nice imagery.. enjoyable reading.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you John.
Another explicit work Thomas with some gentility.
A couple of typos:
'Reddish checks not used to smile'- Cheeks perhaps?
'Kit and kin'-Kith and kin

Posted 10 Years Ago


Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you John, I'll make the edits!x
I missed your poetry.
"Perfect fingers lay heavy on painted thighs,
Tiny veins scream in speed to the skin,
Flaccid memories are far from us in time,
No people to bind him to kit and kin."
You description alive and powerful. A very nice closure to the excellent poetry.
Coyote




Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote!x
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome. Always good to see your name on the board.
Had all the "taste" of guilty pleasures...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

It's the best taste of all!
Sex or about to be caught in the act of something that your parents wouldn't want to find you doing. Steamy and sensual. Good word play and maybe your just eating a peach. Nice job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

maybe so! thank you, make sure to send a few RR
realmwriter

10 Years Ago

I will do that.
Love ... hidden ... on account of its sweet caress ... but with no one to hold and behold ... is a teaser. Was that really a tap on the door? heh heh. Nice one Thomas ...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Ha, Ha! we all live in dread of the TAP!
For me, this reminded me of a teenage encounter, and that moment where his mom raps on the door, because, if it were my mom, the door wasn't supposed to be closed, and she would have burst in. Straightening the clothes, trying to be composed, wondering if it was all a mistake, hoping to do it again ...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Indeed Kl, thank you.

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Added on October 5, 2014
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Thomas Fitzgerald
Thomas Fitzgerald

Wexford, Leinster, Ireland



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