The Fee!

One must always pay those on their knees!

Twist his bones and bend his back,

Cut his meat lean and blue,

Guide that blade to nix the breast,

Lap the blood to come anew.

Bristle tips sooth heavy soles,

Master whips in lashes bold,

Spice the mead with salty sweat,

Drink long and hard never fold.

Grasp his sack and clamp in vice,

Hear his screams as cords get fat,

One more tug to pull them off,

Now dangle them and feed the rat.

Chomping veins and hair alike,

Lasting sight sends thrills to me,

Binding wax will save for later,

Now sit and hurry pay the fee.

Author's Note

A little slice into ones mind!

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and as a society we are constantly on our knees...others taking advantage of us in so many ways..

we are bound in a free nation, it seems.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you Jacob.

[Rachelle]

It's just been tax season here……. :P

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed it has thank you.

[Rachelle]

Aww… you didn't get the joke…. :(
Your poem - akin to talking about taxes……?

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I got it trust me!

[Rachelle]

;D………………..

[N!LoC]

ok... either u are decribing a cow butcher or something... or a very kinky bdsm session... which one is it? lol

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Neither! Thank you!

[s y e]

You're so mega talented, hon. This was fantastic.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[Dayran]

Sounds like you are breaking off with someone ... its sure changed from the old days. Exotic ...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[Cory Barrett]

Thick and reminiscent of blood.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you Streamline

[Rivaxorus]

Ooooo, this is creepy. It sort of gave me chills xD I love it PEN ON!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you Seimei

[Mark]

A very squirmy write. Yikes just the thought of a vice... intense!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ha! thank you Mark.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

OW that was very twisted… to me it reads like someone who sacrifices everything for love but gets nothing in return.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed! Thank you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome.

[A. Amos]

Deep and dark and elegantly penned...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you A.