Valentine Senryu

A quick response to my ever optimistic friend! you know who you are!

Horrid Valentine,

How I loath you so,

Roses are dead.

Author's Note

Just my ever bleak outlook!

Reviews

[dillonjensen]

I've never come to understand why a rose is the universal symbol of love on that day or any day. It is but a flower to me. Beautiful, yes. Symbol of love? Who is to say? If I were to think about receiving roses at any point in life, I would have to question what just happened, and if that person has any concept of the meaning of love. I suppose that is open to many interpretations though. Anyways, good read!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you x

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah valentines day. I've had some great times on that day. Good Senryu.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

thank you x

[Marie]

I'd certainly hate to get a valentine like this. Although it's certainly better than the sappy love poems most poets can't seem to get away from.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

thank you x

[Michael Oliver]

-And Thomas is blue. Yeah bollocks to them all -

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Nice choice of words! thank you

[Mark]

Heh, oh ya. Death to that Cupid guy as well!!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

here here, thank you x

[Saddam]

Roses are dead.
ah dear you sayed it very well dear...love the way which you discribed. thanks for sharing.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

thank you x

[Frieda P]

LMAO...you're a horrid lover dear! So this is the anitvenom for syrup eh? A darkly hue'd Valentine how apropos you dark angel of mine! ;-) Love it but I'll get you back...when you least expect it sweetie!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I have no doubt about that my love, thank you x

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I love this, dear Thomas! LMAO!
My response to your wonderful satire! ...

Roses are dead!!
I pricked my finger,
spurting blood Red!
Valentine, kiss my arse,
off with your head! ;D

Thank you for sharing, sweetie!~xoxo~:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Fabulous, thank you x

[Brittany Zedalis]

Aw..nicely done. :) haha.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you x

[Sadiesmiles]

It's so beautiful!!........:)..

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ha, thank you x

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh My GAWD I am going to frame it.

[Lyn Anderson]

Now question, on reflection. I read it as LOATHE, but it could be loath, a slightly different spin ...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

No it's absolutely loath!