Vanished.

Vanished.

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
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A prose to ponder and fear for the weekend!

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A slight tremble crosses lashes closed,

Bright souls leave this gaol of flesh,

No hope is often the worst of all,

Clear silence has heaped in on mesh.


Dark and smog smother your body,

Breath falls heavy on my naked nape,

Grunting lasts for times unknown now,

No pleading for life just Eden's grape.


An apple of Sodom lays heavy in veins,

Sleeping comes so quick between aches,

Ticking sounded by bone not of clock,

Those nails leaving cuts like sharpened rakes.


Never fear those gone or to come in your stead,

They too have dreams to be banished,

A monster he may be we all know that,

In time my sweet we all shake and are vanished.

© 2014 Thomas Fitzgerald


Author's Note

Thomas Fitzgerald
Honesty my darlings x

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At first when I read this, I was not entirely positive it connected right in my mind. I read it a few more times and it still doesn't feel like I got the right notion. Funny, right? Here's where my mind went while reading this; At first, I just got this dark, smoky image. And then I shivered. Literally, your work gave me goosebumps. There's something in this piece that I truly love. Although my perception of your work is more of feelings I can't describe, I do have to say that I love it. Very well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

You are to kind x



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At first when I read this, I was not entirely positive it connected right in my mind. I read it a few more times and it still doesn't feel like I got the right notion. Funny, right? Here's where my mind went while reading this; At first, I just got this dark, smoky image. And then I shivered. Literally, your work gave me goosebumps. There's something in this piece that I truly love. Although my perception of your work is more of feelings I can't describe, I do have to say that I love it. Very well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

You are to kind x
Brilliantly frightful... loved each well crafted line that sent chills down the spine... well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
Fantastic. It stuck in my mind for a long while after I read it! Great job! I loved the part:

Dark and smog smother your body,
Breath falls heavy on my naked nape,

:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
Konigin

10 Years Ago

Your Welcome! ^.^
You are wild,witty, venomous, vital and wonderful! That's all, for now.

K.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you K.N. x
This was very interesting Thomas.Who knows what if anything the hereafter holds for us ?Makes you think it does.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you x
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
And death is inevitable for all of us, hence we will all vanish at one point or another. And who knows if death will be as gruesome as you portray it to be?

Interesting read.
xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

I hope so, thank you x
Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

10 Years Ago

my pleasure
Deep, dark and disturbing. It made for an intersting read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you x
Do we find it or does it find us, walking that path to an ending of reasonable course and unknown future. Very cool Thomas

Posted 10 Years Ago


Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jack
"Never fear those gone or to come in your stead,
They too have dreams to be banished,
A monster he may be we all know that,
In time my sweet we all shake and are vanished."

I'm comforted and scared at the same time. Thannks for sharing your profound thoughts. :)





Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you x
Time always moves and in the end we all move out of this world. I believe onto hesaven/hell depending on ones spirit but this shows the mortality of life. We can't live forever and as time goes on our bones ache and your bodies wither. We can not stop it all we can do is live life to the fullest and be healthy but that just prolongs the inevitable.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you x

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Thomas Fitzgerald

Wexford, Leinster, Ireland



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