At first when I read this, I was not entirely positive it connected right in my mind. I read it a few more times and it still doesn't feel like I got the right notion. Funny, right? Here's where my mind went while reading this; At first, I just got this dark, smoky image. And then I shivered. Literally, your work gave me goosebumps. There's something in this piece that I truly love. Although my perception of your work is more of feelings I can't describe, I do have to say that I love it. Very well done.
At first when I read this, I was not entirely positive it connected right in my mind. I read it a few more times and it still doesn't feel like I got the right notion. Funny, right? Here's where my mind went while reading this; At first, I just got this dark, smoky image. And then I shivered. Literally, your work gave me goosebumps. There's something in this piece that I truly love. Although my perception of your work is more of feelings I can't describe, I do have to say that I love it. Very well done.
And death is inevitable for all of us, hence we will all vanish at one point or another. And who knows if death will be as gruesome as you portray it to be?
"Never fear those gone or to come in your stead,
They too have dreams to be banished,
A monster he may be we all know that,
In time my sweet we all shake and are vanished."
I'm comforted and scared at the same time. Thannks for sharing your profound thoughts. :)
Time always moves and in the end we all move out of this world. I believe onto hesaven/hell depending on ones spirit but this shows the mortality of life. We can't live forever and as time goes on our bones ache and your bodies wither. We can not stop it all we can do is live life to the fullest and be healthy but that just prolongs the inevitable.
To all who know by now - I love you.
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