January

January

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
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A look to the start of your year.

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Janus our God you open the doorway,

Release the old and sweep the floor,

Bristles cling to mistakes and wisp,

Above a coil of wind lands to moor.


Saxons names you wolf month once,

For reasons of guarding the field,

Teeth bared and telling to stop quick,

Release a guide to help one yield.


Cottage pinks grow free from garnets,

Colours flood the mind and make free,

Soft touching and truths roam endless,

Ah the tramp now left on decree.


Plough Sunday nestles deep in your breast,

Burns night has lasting first members,

Martin Luther King Jr. celebrated in states,

Republic Day also has rose from the embers.

© 2014 Thomas Fitzgerald


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Thomas Fitzgerald
Just a review of the first month of the year.

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Martin Luther King, Jr. Is one of my heroes... As a child he was the one who spoke out for all races not just his own. Growing up as a child mixed with so many different nationalities was hard, but some how clinging to his words helped me raise my head high.
I love that you have started the New year with this piece, my sweet Thomas. You are a Jewel.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Priscilla Sayers

10 Years Ago

I've missed reading your work Love.
Yet my absence is due to so many things in Life that has h.. read more
Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Not at all, I'm only recently back to full swing myself, make sure and be happy x
Priscilla Sayers

10 Years Ago

I promise I am trying real hard to be happy. There is really nothing to be so sad about, well unless.. read more



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Indeed a fine tribute to January.Well penned Thomas:)

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Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you Vidya.
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
"Just a" isn't a fair assessment of your writing, always thoughtful, constructed for maximum impact, and layers of meaning.

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Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you KL x
to be or not to be that is the conundrum - whether the answer lies on others attempts - or our present foam of ideas - you captured the unknowing the precarious ah yes young Thomas the master still lies coiled in your breast and winks at us as you find words.

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Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you Michael, always a pleasure.
A great write Thomas! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

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Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you Cody.
The wonder of your pen in any month or season...Bravo..............

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Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sami.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...................
A fine dignified remembrance of ceremonious occasions !

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Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you Tom.
Good reminder. I wasn't aware of all those things.

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Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you Marie.
You made it sound so wondrous whilst I'm freezing my tushy off love. An amazing read, as you always deliver Thomas.

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Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda!
I like the description of January. Here in Michigan. The Gods are pissed off and dropping 12 inches of snow. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote - maybe a sacrifice well appease them! x
This is beautiful. What a beautiful way to start our year, Thomas. Well done, doll. x

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Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Thank you Kimmie x

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