The Big Hard One!

Things we can't say with ease!

Those damn words,

Why doesn't our mouth spit it out,

I love you!

 

Author's Note

Have fun reading!

Reviews

[Caradoc]

I know how others can have such a hard time admitting their feelings to others. Often it is the fear we feel that holds us back. Though I have felt such fear in admitting feelings, when it came right down to it and I was with the woman who has held my heart for 6 years, nothing held me back from saying those three little words.

Now, I tell her every day that, indeed, I do love her.

Well written and important.

-Caradoc

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you my darling x

[Commanda Panda]

Very little, yet a lot to think about. In what context can't we say those words? To our family members? To our friends? To our lovers? And then there is the age-old question of why.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed my darling, thank you for the review.

[Neville]

Less is often more or so they say
and in this case, a lot more. There said it ... Regards, N

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you x

[SuzieQ]

Why is it that some men can spit those words out much too easily and for others it is like saying swear words in a church. Great writing!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you x

[Dayran]

Sometimes it breaks a barricade, sometimes coils back before springing, often it blossoms and the words flow like nectar, on a few occasions it thunders and then pours ... it also rises in response to a question. Good one Thomas.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank youo Dayran.

[Baby Ricochet]

I got to admit the title pulled me in. Great senryu Thomas

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you x

[Coyote Poetry]

Some words need to be spoke rarely. Using them too often can make them meaningless. Direct and honest thoughts in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you x

[Frieda P]

You managed to rise above with this one my love! ;-)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you my love x

[The Verse: A Poetry Jou..]

A clash between an aphorism, prose poetry and poesy. very well done, brief yet sharp like a knife!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you Dan! x

[The Verse: A Poetry Journal]

absolutely my pleasure

[Mark]

The title and poem are linked, yet can stand (*cough*) by themselves as well. Masterful write Thomas. :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed mark, onw might say they both are erect in meaning!

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Succinct, passionate and direct. Thomas, you should be in advertising! ;-)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ha, well maybe! x