The Big Hard One!

The Big Hard One!

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
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Things we can't say with ease!

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Those damn words,

Why doesn't our mouth spit it out,

I love you!

 

© 2013 Thomas Fitzgerald


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Thomas Fitzgerald
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I know how others can have such a hard time admitting their feelings to others. Often it is the fear we feel that holds us back. Though I have felt such fear in admitting feelings, when it came right down to it and I was with the woman who has held my heart for 6 years, nothing held me back from saying those three little words.

Now, I tell her every day that, indeed, I do love her.

Well written and important.

-Caradoc

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

11 Years Ago

Thank you my darling x



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Agreed. Only three words. Yet they rarely come out.
lissalovesyou:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

10 Years Ago

Indeed, thank you.
I know how others can have such a hard time admitting their feelings to others. Often it is the fear we feel that holds us back. Though I have felt such fear in admitting feelings, when it came right down to it and I was with the woman who has held my heart for 6 years, nothing held me back from saying those three little words.

Now, I tell her every day that, indeed, I do love her.

Well written and important.

-Caradoc

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

11 Years Ago

Thank you my darling x
Sometimes those words are said way too often and not meant at all. I think it is meant more when not quickly said.

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's weird how they get stuck behind our lips somewhere and hide, only to revolve back through our mind like a revolving door. Powerfully said.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Not the easiest 3 words to say. Big impact with few words xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yes, those three words do seem to be the hardest ones to say. Great message in such few words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love love love this... Why is it so difficult for some to say... xo shallimarRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sometimes the hardest thing to say. Well said in a minimalist style.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Thomas Fitzgerald

11 Years Ago

Thank you Craig.
Beginning, middle and end...in just a few words. Kudos! The title was a teaser, too!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Thomas Fitzgerald

11 Years Ago

lol, indeed, thank you x
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Amy
I wonder why we always find it difficult saying that. i guess love is not that simple after all... or is it?

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Thomas Fitzgerald

11 Years Ago

Indeed! Thank you x

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Added on July 4, 2013
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Tags: Love, Senryu, Poetry, People

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Thomas Fitzgerald
Thomas Fitzgerald

Wexford, Leinster, Ireland



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