A very poignant comment on life. Looking at it in a way, life is just a nothingness, a meaningless interval between two events. And we, in futility, searching for a meaning, a drug, till all is swept by time into an open, waiting grave. I agree with Shane Mohamed -A masterpiece from you.
I not only love the English language, but I do adore someone who knows how to treat it just write! Wonderful piece, with a really nice twist at the end.
A very poignant comment on life. Looking at it in a way, life is just a nothingness, a meaningless interval between two events. And we, in futility, searching for a meaning, a drug, till all is swept by time into an open, waiting grave. I agree with Shane Mohamed -A masterpiece from you.
Dark, melancholic, and pondersome. I had to read this a couple of times to grok everything, but in this case, it was a good thing. It wasn't that your words were unclear, I just needed to wrap my brain around them. That is one hellava long word! *phew* I tried to pronounce it and gave up midway through.. lol. It makes for a catchy title and idea for a poem though. Great job, Thomas.
Well, the piece is dark and gloomy and stark with precision. My eyes darted back and forth to grasp the depth of the piece; one thing that I noticed; you always execute with intentional depth. It sounds like a solemn poem that a hopeless character would write before committing suicide. It's as if he or she renounces life, with all of its pleasures. Fantastic, really. Masterpieces are being written.
floc·ci·nau·ci·ni·hil·i·pil·i·fi·ca·tion
[flok-suh-naw-suh-nahy-hil-uh-pil-uh-fi-key-shuhn] Show IPA
noun
Rare. the estimation of something as valueless (encountered mainly as an example of one of the longest words in the English language).
Yeah, one of THE longest words in the English language, but it's not short on interpretations...
Life, there's another word left wide open for interpretation. Is it the moment we are conceived? Does it pertain to the force inside which drives us? Or, is it just a generic reference to a hum-drum meaning of useless existence> Interpretations are everything, aren't they?
Certain pains, you pick up along life's journey, you never shake off. Others, you learn to live with, barely.
It's like sitting in front of a TV channel surfing and nothing's on. or going out, getting hammered, waking up hung over and not knowing what happened. An adventure that never happened, a hot f**k you never got, a moment lost that went nowhere. Outstanding write sir!
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