CRY!

CRY!

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
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A look at that intimate moment when we show people true emotion.

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Crisp rims have fallen victim to tears that sooth pain,

Moving skin tells tales to those waiting in silence,

Thin lashes look darker in a time of moisture and emotion,

Shaking departure of skittish men an uneasy alliance.

 

A tiny finger is all that guards ones face against the world,

Brushing droplets way on cheeks now pink and heated,

Thoughts bounce forth to make us fight or recoil,

Daring taunts have pierced scowls and tension repeated.

 

Crow’s feet stay covered and magnified at the same time,

There the eyes now punish the sky by opening to fast,

Green lights pour forth into minds around you my dear,

No more tears to cry tonight no more binging in cast.

© 2013 Thomas Fitzgerald


Author's Note

Thomas Fitzgerald
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"Thin lashes look darker in a time of moisture and emotion,

Shaking departure of skittish men an uneasy alliance.



A tiny finger is all that guards ones face against the world,

Brushing droplets way on cheeks now pink and heated,"
All the lines are good in this poem and all the expressions are wonderful. I agree with Chris a lot on his point...Marvelous work....:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)



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"Thin lashes look darker in a time of moisture and emotion,

Shaking departure of skittish men an uneasy alliance.



A tiny finger is all that guards ones face against the world,

Brushing droplets way on cheeks now pink and heated,"
All the lines are good in this poem and all the expressions are wonderful. I agree with Chris a lot on his point...Marvelous work....:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)
Tears are so many emotions, joy, truth, sorrow, all purging of the soul, sometimes endings, other's signify new beginnings. You blew me away with this one, the gentler side of Thomas, love it my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'm always overjoyed when I don't have to cringe, just saying ;-)
A detailed description of a powerful event painted in a poem. Tears have many colours and yesterday I held the desperate tears of someone I love and they were washing away years of unhappiness.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Being real always carries a price... always.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Thomas, every time I open one of your pieces, I prepare to have the ever-loving wind knocked out of me. I am absolutely astonished and mesmerised by this beautiful piece.

It flows, it sings, it touches a very deep part of me and I thank you for that.

There are a few whoopsies but who cares when such emotion is pasted for the world to drink!

Posted 11 Years Ago


yes, it is better to just let it out...yes, there is the aftermath, the clues of the cry left for all to see...but there is a purging...a catharsis that happens because of those tears...we cry them and then start anew..

some spelling editing in spots needed, but a beautifully written poem...

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tears are wonderful for soothing the pain...tears along with time...nicely done Thomas:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas Fitzgerald

11 Years Ago

I couldn't agree more, thank you my darling.
SyberRose

11 Years Ago

you are welcome:)

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Added on June 10, 2013
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Tags: Cry, Tear, Eye, Emotion, Pain, Subtle, Time

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Thomas Fitzgerald
Thomas Fitzgerald

Wexford, Leinster, Ireland



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