T.I.M.E

Just a small piece that came to me!

Towers crumpled neatly in pages stacked within concealments,

Imagination runs and runs but never catches up with life,

Member’s arrows pulse on without interlude so wretched,

Empty quarters leave hearts dense in forthcoming deportments.

Author's Note

No notes - rreview at will.

Reviews

[Dayran]

There's a great deal more you could add to it ... its the great creator, the initiator of it all, the nurturer, the deceiver, liar, rescuer and savior. It is but the biggest thing we can ever come into contact with as a concept in our lives and then again ' do you have the time? I forget my wristwatch.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

ha do any of us really!

[Frieda P]

You really had to reach for this one, something else. You've perceived an extremely astute acrostic here. Well done Thomas!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, I love where you went with this, total surprise.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the use of the word "time". Each statement opening the door to thoughts and question. Life can make us weary. Never know what may appear around the next turn. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you x

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Thomas, it flows well and as an acrostic it works. Crafting might make it even better.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Maybe

[Baby Ricochet]

I like it/I gotta come up with a few of these

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Get to work!

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Good read and write.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you Brandon! x

[Sami Khalil]

A thought provoking piece. I like you play on Time.
My favorite is : " Empty quarters leave hearts dense...
A very good one...:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you Sami! x

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome... You are going deeper and deeper...:)

[Sam Gregory]

Hmmm, thought provoking as always. A good description, makes one conscious of the years to come. I do think the first line is a little too long for the flow that follows it tbh, only critique I can find tbh. Keep at it :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you Sam! x

[Sam Gregory]

No problemo amigo