The Couple.

A look at a single moment we are lucky to share once!

There my copy is still against silk stained in sweat,

How words covet the flesh only fingers caress,

Be mindful of eyes so beautiful they burn red,

My darlings forever in times we seek redress.

 

 

Kisses sought and found burrow deep within me,

Pleading nonsense waiting for times unsolved,

Arms so strong they lift fear and worry away in one,

A problem leaving angst among memories now resolved.

 

 

Single strands try hopelessly to cover a sober face,

Not shy but abashed in silliness and guided heat,

Long for the partner they told you would never come,

How wrong a friend can be with proof now in heartbeat.

 

 

An act so pleasurable it needs no explanation,

Yet we must give it words to have meaning no fright,

Lashes as long to compel minds of females to envy,

Oh my you have given a rounded gift here this hot night.

Author's Note

Take your time!

Reviews

[Dayran]

Had this friend but couldn't make my mind about him. He was either the devil or God. So he told me to prove him devil ... poor bloke, I thought I might have broke his back ... but guess what ... a lot of people call him names like lizard, illuminati and the deceiver ... but to me he would always be my friend. I thought I caught some of that in this poem. Great write Thomas.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you

[Valentine]

Some are fortunate enough to find this a few times in life..some not at all..Like this one..Kathie

[Jeff]

Very vivid images you painted here.

[Quattro Hall]

This reminds me of a song about cheating lol
I do like it, "Lashes as long to compel minds of females to envy" genuine genius.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you!

[Buniheart]

such a sensual romance :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Some gifts and touches leave us with permanent desire to repeat the dance again. Description took reader to secret thoughts and memories. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[外人 (Gaiji..]

My friend, your lexic is always outstanding ! It makes me remember English is a foreign language for me xD
For what I understood, that's a very good poem ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A special moment in time described in verse that is touching and full of joy mixed with longing.

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Thomas, there is no review that I could give that would do this justice. Please accept my simple-minded, "Well written thus well done."

[quinfinn]

sounds as if someone is enamoured with the memory of a very pleasurable experience with a very lovely and capable benefactor of wishes fulfilled. your loving and skillful pen gives credence and substance to this joyful occasion. wonderfully penned, dear Thomas!