The Six.

A look a those woman we all pray to in our own ways!

A thought grows clear and serves her accrued,

Glimmers of honesty expel from papers arena,

Talent is known and wisdom is always thought,

Clever women grant wishes from the one Athena.

 

A verse so tangled that she works hard to solve,

Prayers guided by men that seek redemption rigid,

Spirited souls fly high to meet the one protection,

Ah hear us writers our dear sweet Bridgid.

 

Weather changes as seasons do with flat people,

A hand sculpts faces so clear but never soaked ashen,

Globes of nonsense are seen from pillars straight,

Oh feline of others shaped for statues of Cerridwen.

 

Those unscarred beauties that never lay down with men,

Take scripts that polish hopes of held manna,

Clear and subtle flesh coveted strong and forever,

Protect them closely the lofty Diana.

 

Gallop hard and strong black animals of haste,

Make movements on those heretics of Estonia,

I heard that rumour you left men behind,

Take heed of w****s that tell tales Epona.

 

Lay waste to all those angry fighters of wars,

You love with fierce plight and leave scars nova,

Hatred and spikes lay close by your amble breast,

The green light shines lowly on you now Freya.

Author's Note

Be honest as always my loves.

Reviews

[Tree]

A classical framed piece that rings with true authority, especially when read aloud. Women, history has made many into goddesses. Both good, and bad... And I very much liked the progression of the piece, it gives us strength in its final proclamation...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

thank you my darling, I appreciate it!

[Troy Henson]

A beautiful depiction of woman and her place in time with so many faces a woman has adorned over historical times this piece speaks such volumes.

Very well done

Regards
Troy

[Lyn Anderson]

You have this melody to your writes that is definitely all your own -- a historical journey -- women whose legends transcend time ... a wonderful piece.

[VennelaMargame]

Wonderful classical poem, and I like how it manages to balanced in a female-positive sense without drumming it over your head like a lot of other poems would, where the socio-political sense trumps the sense of craftsmanship or artifice.

[Raven Starhawk]

Truly a vision of graceful writing.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Raven your adorable x

[jesswrecks]

Interesting and curved with beauty.
Great read!

[KAOlmsted]

I am so enamored with this piece...I see a lot of thought in your chosen words. You truly care for your reader and I appreciate that, Thomas. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

-kimmer

[Chris]

It was a good read Thomas ...and well spoken.

[Buniheart]

This is quite a rich poem indeed!

[Dayran]

Virtue, when it is represented by someone would need a champion to protect and preserve her. Such a champion does not support her truth but what is true in life. As men we come to realize upon the fall of virtue that we have been amiss. That we need to understand it better. A nice write.