Needles.

A look at the treatments we put our bodies through!

Slack little scars tell tales ought not to be told,

Eyes slit to the need of seeing men through the cold,

Fragile minds kept ignorant of present exclusion,

My stomach leaves pangs of several repulsions.

 

With a needle sharp with speed yet steady,

Takes time for blood to gather and ready,

Bleak moments of gowns hooked up to spire,

Wrinkled women have lost the will for desire.

 

Natural thoughts are stranded on shores of malice,

Every looking for the mythical and sparkling chalice,

A cup of twenty the cards are every true and fair,

Feeble minds stare blank and hopeless with care.

 

Take heed of pure gibberish written perfectly in books,

Never knowing why they stand tall with faint looks,

Break bones if needs be and they will with decree,

Make note my dear sweet friends, you’ll never be free.

Author's Note

Honesty!

Reviews

[s y e]

This was very well written. Alot of people wouldn't write about what hey went through but I think it's very well written by you and good that you have written it and maybe other people who do this will open up about it instead of bottling it all up.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

thank you

[s y e]

Welcome

[Priyanka Natesh]

It's made a...sinister read for me. Conveys several things. Great piece. Thank you

[MrOldFashioned]

well thought out i thought this was, it tells it's tale, seems quite the buzz.

[Valentine]

Not many people will tell of their experience with needles or drugs..I was so ill for so long..in hospital afer hospital..I hate even looking at a needle,,katihe

[Tom]

I'll keep this succinct - excellent!

[Tate Morgan]

One of the best i have read here You have thew spark sir!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

absolutely if this is about addiction, you can never be free unless you want to turns into being willing to.......awesome write Thomas.

[Ruth]

Whatever seeks our demise or whatever means of demise we seek...all levels to the fact that we truly are "never free."
Guess some souls shall never balance freedom...or what it indeed is..thought provoking darlin!
xoxo

[Calypso]

I sense gore and anger. This was well developed.