PULSE

To say I  was swept over my feet would be an understatement,

Lust infused with animal instinct turned out to be a detriment,

Cologne  weakened by the raw aura of sweaty palms,fidgeting....

Whether its a sweet dream or a beautiful nightmare I wanna be starring,

As a belle and he my beau,his hair like that of a starling,

If this was an opera I'd be at crescendo because of my darling!!

Somebody save me from having my days and nights spent,

On reveries and daydreams of  ravishing this savage beauty!!!

 

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

This is a really well written piece of poetry, i think thats what gave this writing the edge, because its written with a vibrant sense of instinct, it built itself up to the end and the reader is expecting a strong ending, well done.

[kishie]

thank you for the reviews.....

[Jibey]

Certainly pulsing with sexual energy... burning with desire and lustful dreams!

[Lyn Cree]

veryy pretty ; i love the words you used .
:] amazing.