Past Forever, Love

I think I may edit this later on... Not too sure if I like how I ended it...

You killed me with your voice

[slowly]

with love

You killed me with your words

[deeply]

with hurt

 

Your love is gone now

Passed along to another

She's hearing what I once heard,

feeling what I once felt

 

I'd be jealous if I knew

those words & emotions were legitimately true

 

But they aren't

Can't be

Because we were meant to be

To be together,

past forever

 

Our love was unconditional

Worth out living the world;

all past, present, future generations

 

You killed me with your emotions

Emotions I still feel

Continue to hold on to

 

Your love isn't gone

It can't be

 

It's just...unreachable

Distant

 

You killed me

With your voice,

your love

Reviews

[Adele Potter]

Why would you not like this? This is awesome!

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Very interesting - love it!