Awakened

Well I was dead for a while, 

But Folks I'm alive now.

Cherishing the value of life,

So pals I'm alive now.

      Breaking the roots from ground,

  Breathing the wide blue sky now.

Looking the untouched stars, 

    Listening the unsung rhyme now.

I promise I won't be sleeping, 

Anymore the hours of this life.

I may not speak like else, 

But I will be heard Otherwise.

Reviews

[Malcolm Reynolds]

Nice poem, like that emphasis on living life.

[Emily]

Love the first stanza!
Keep on writing!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Inspiring write Kirty... I love such inspiring stuff.... your poem left it asking for more... good one....

[Kirty labra]

I am pleased by your words sir. Thank you