What is love?

What is love?

A Poem by kirsten
"

What love is to me

"

What is love?

It's the way I felt safe when you held my hand

It's the way you wrapped your arms around me

It’s the way your smile made me forget everything bad in the world

It's the way hearing your voice made the rest of the world so quite

It's the way i felt when you told me I was amazing

It's the way you made me feel beautiful, even when i wasn't

It's the way your hands felt on my skin

It's the way you kissed me

It's the way that you felt like my best friend, and my world

It's the way your breath felt on my neck

It's the way i felt like i was ontop of the world whenever i was with you

It's the way my heart broke when you left

It’s the pain the lasts months and months

It's moving on

© 2012 kirsten


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So sad! Even though there is pain in this poem I like how you start off by talking about how good the relationship was and in the end you let us in and show us that they left the relationship. That to me, is a very vulnerable line. It's personal and I like how you are not afraid to put that out there. You ended this piece just right! "It's moving on" Great way of saying that no matter what, you won't dwell, even through the pain. Great poem! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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So sad! Even though there is pain in this poem I like how you start off by talking about how good the relationship was and in the end you let us in and show us that they left the relationship. That to me, is a very vulnerable line. It's personal and I like how you are not afraid to put that out there. You ended this piece just right! "It's moving on" Great way of saying that no matter what, you won't dwell, even through the pain. Great poem! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 18, 2012
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Tags: love, heartbreak, relationships, happy, sad

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kirsten
kirsten

Perry, MI



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Hello, I'm Kirsten and I am 17 years old. When i write it's to let my feelings out, because writing is really the only way I know how to do so. So my stories and poems and journals are basically a map.. more..

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