mist

mist

A Poem by kirsten773

running threw dark mist
i shouldnt have come i know
but i just couldnt resist 
tell me this is a hoax
tell its a dream
tell me why i cant get out a scream
eyes tearing lungs burning 
legs in pain and stomach churning
i cant stop i have to keep going 
if he catches me 
what he is going to do to me there no knowing
why is this happening to me
please! please! someone help me!
is that a road up further
no time to ask 
so i push my legs harder
i can hear my feet and grounding slapping
pain over takes me as i trip and hit the ground
i hear light clapping
oh my God
i have been found

© 2011 kirsten773


Author's Note

kirsten773
i am in a bit of a block right now, but i felt a massive urge to write.. soo this is what i got. hahah(: enjoy

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I love the sense of momentum and suspense. It's very scary especially because the 'story' isn't clear, but at the end of the poem, the reader just cares about the chase. Awesome job!

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kirsten773

morongo valley, ca., CA



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