killing me gently

eyes that take my breath

smile that makes me want to scream

body that makes me look forward to death

tell me this is all a dream

a touch so soft it stabs

you reach in to grab

my heart and you twist it so intently 

and you dont even know 

that your killing me gently

Author's Note

im in a bit of a writers block. haha, its not my best but enjoy anyway!(:

Reviews

[CaitlynYOO(:]

Im a professional and I must say, this is quite good. I love the raw emotions it portrays and all that good bull!:D
It was SIIIICKKK. Within the first two poems, (in which I loved) I'd have to say that this one is WINNER WINNER CHICKEN DINNER!

[CaitlynYOO(:]

I LIIKKEEE THHEEESSS ONNNEEE(:

i have a writers block for half a year. i thought i was done writing poetry then i made a sick a*s poem. its pretty good for someone that has writer block.

[deeps]

Like this, Writers block does suck.
Nicely written.

[Valandil93]

I really like the rhyme scheme! If you have writer's block, don't feel the pressure to churn out poems. However, if your poems are this good when you are on writer's block, you have little to complain about =)