crying

please dont cry because of        

me myself and  

i really do care 

about nothing but me

and i love 

you really need to stop

because your makeup is 

ruined my whole day, my

god baby 

please stop

crying isnt getting us

anywhere but here 

please i do want 

you to stop

crying isnt helping 

this ends now

im sorry

im sorry

its over

its over

what he said                                                          what he thought

please dont cry because of me                                                   me myself and i 

i really do care about...                                      i care about nothing but me and

i love you                                                         you really need to stop because

your makeup is ruined                                                 you ruined my whole day

baby please                                                                         my god stop crying

crying isnt getting us any where                                             anywhere but here

i do want you                                                              i want you to stop crying

crying isnt helping this                                                                 this ends now

im sorry                                                                                              im sorry

its over                                                                                                its over

Author's Note

if you dont get it thats okay, you might want to reread it a time or two to really understand it. hint: the bold words are what he is really thinking.(:

Reviews

[light and ashes]

This is a cool poem. I like the way you combined what he actually thought and what he said.

[CaitlynYOO(:]

DUUUUUDE. I like this one! i had to read it about 15 times, but I GOT IT:D

[stars are far]

i got that
and it is so creative and nice ..
well done :)

[Valandil93]

Very creative! I like how you combined both his thoughts into one poem. It's a very interesting dynamic you've set up. Great job. You've really touched upon this subject well.