dead man walking

i watch over you 

creeping and stocking

you cant see me 

but i see you

oh how oblivious you must be

i can caress your cheek with care

and there is nothing you can do

you think its the wind when i run my fingers through your hair

i whisper in your ear with no reason

when he comes near you

i hear your heart change like the season

and for what?

the man who shows you no love 

when i show you nothing but

all i can do is watch you from above

but im right in front of you

and ill never leave your side

because i still love you

and you were supposed to be MY bride

one day ill be with you once more

but for now ill i can do is keep gawking

because all i am is a dead man walking

Author's Note

i wrote this poem at three or four in the morning..
so if it makes no sense then that is due to lack of sleep

Reviews

[CaitlynYOO(:]

I TOTALLY digged this one! Especially with youre backround music singing in the backround! CREEEEPPPY! But its emotionaly aspect was pretty BEAST! I like it! This is like a poem where little kids sing in scary black backrounds in scar movies! SUBMIT IT SOMEWHERE!:P

[Valandil93]

Very creepy! I got chills reading it. nice job :)

[Blessed_Angel]

this poem is very good it makes perfect since but poetry does not have to make since that is what it gives it creativity and makes it your own. Looking foreword to read more from you.

[deeps]

OOO! WOW!!!
I really got into this write.
This is amazing!
I really like your style.
You're a wonderful poet.